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Dr. Hindsight

PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 7:15 pm    Author: Dr. Hindsight    Post subject: Another Deal or No Deal Poem

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Since we've already had one rather successful Deal poem, I'll add another one. Enjoy!

Daunting task of opening boxes.
Endemol's given us a winner.
Attractive host? Some think so.
Love to see the players win big.

Ordinary-looking game? Far from it.
Rambunctious are some of the players.

Noel's a fantastic host.
Only the strong survive - or do they?

Deals are offered by the Banker.
Everyone watches it on Channel 4.
A lot of money on the line.
Lose the attitude, Mr. Banker.

And there you have it. I know that it might not be as good as the first one, but hey, at elast I gave it a shot. Let me know what y'all think of it.

-Mark.

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Cherry Blossom

PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 7:16 pm    Author: Cherry Blossom    Post subject:
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:smt006


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"The Banker"

PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 7:16 pm    Author: "The Banker"    Post subject:

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'tis good! :-D

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"The Banker"

PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 7:16 pm    Author: "The Banker"    Post subject:

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Cherry Blossom wrote:
Poem's have to rhyme...it's the law!


No poem's don't have to rhyme.

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daniel4389

PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 7:18 pm    Author: daniel4389    Post subject:

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And neither do they need an apostrophe... :D

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LittleFrog

PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 7:19 pm    Author: LittleFrog    Post subject:
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I think it's quite deep maaan!

No in all fairness, that's a good poem mate.

Was there any planning involved? I mean, did you count the number of syllables or anything in this part:

Ordinary-looking game? Far from it.
Rambunctious are some of the players


I don't really know what Rambunctious means, lol.

Good work! :) :) :) :)


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Dr. Hindsight

PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 7:21 pm    Author: Dr. Hindsight    Post subject:

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You've probably noticed this already, but each stanza uses a letter in the show's title. I used to do these kinds of poems with people's names. The first one I ever did used my own name, Mark E. David. They're fun to do, and I'm glad that at least some of you like it so far.
-Mark.

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LittleFrog

PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 7:21 pm    Author: LittleFrog    Post subject:
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http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=rambunctious

Ahh that's better!


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LittleFrog

PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 7:23 pm    Author: LittleFrog    Post subject:
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Mark77 wrote:
You've probably noticed this already, but each stanza uses a letter in the show's title. I used to do these kinds of poems with people's names. The first one I ever did used my own name, Mark E. David. They're fun to do, and I'm glad that at least some of you like it so far.
-Mark.


I didn't notice that! Silly me. But I did notice something funny was going on!! I'm daft :smt043

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Dr. Hindsight

PostPosted: Wed May 24, 2006 7:23 pm    Author: Dr. Hindsight    Post subject:

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LittleFrog wrote:


What was that for?
-Mark.

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